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Six AI reviewers read your biomedical manuscript, and an AI editor revises it, down to the structure of your argument. A PhD scientist checks the result before it reaches you as tracked changes in Word.

Read the full review first. Pay only if you use it.

A sample edit

From the results section of a phase II oncology trial. Edits arrive as tracked changes you accept or reject in Word. We never change your data. When two numbers disagree, we ask.

Example

Median overall survival was 14.2 months (95% CI, 11.8 to 16.9) in the intervention arm. The addition of maintenance therapy significantly improved outcomes in all patientswas associated with longer overall survival (HR 0.71; 95% CI, 0.52 to 0.97).

How it works

  1. Upload. Send the manuscript as .docx with tables, figures, and supplement, and tell us the target journal. Takes about two minutes.
  2. Six reviewers read in parallel. Each looks for one kind of problem: language, argument, reporting guidelines, numbers, literature, data interpretation.
  3. An AI editor revises the manuscript. It works every finding into the text, rewrites the Introduction and Discussion where the argument can be stronger, and tightens the prose to your target journal's style. A rewrite replaces your version only if a blind comparison rates it stronger.
  4. Every change is checked. A second AI model reviews the edited manuscript, and a fact-check traces every new or changed number and reference to its source.
  5. A scientist checks the review. A PhD scientist reads every finding, keeps what helps, and removes what doesn't. Nothing reaches you unchecked.
  6. The review arrives by email. You accept or reject each change in Word.

Table 1. The six reviewers and what each one checks.

ReviewerChecks
Language & clarityFixes grammar and terminology, and shortens sentences that say more than the data.
Argument & logicChecks that each conclusion follows from the results and flags overclaims.
Reporting & formatCONSORT, STROBE, and your target journal's author guidelines, word limits, and reference style.
Internal consistencyCompares every number with every other place it appears: abstract, text, tables, figures.
LiteratureFinds missing and outdated references, checks that citations say what you cite them for, and lists likely reviewer questions.
Data interpretationReads your figures and tables, tests your claims against them, and suggests other explanations a reviewer might raise.

€750 per manuscript

One price. Tables and supplement included. Plus VAT where applicable. You get:

  • Every document you send, in Word with tracked changes and margin comments
  • A review summary of what we changed and why
  • A research report with hypotheses from your data, literature gaps, and the questions reviewers are likely to ask
  • A pre-submission checklist with every item that needs your decision

You get the full review before you pay. If none of our edits make it into your manuscript, you owe nothing.

"I expected language edits. I also got a rigorous analysis of numerical consistency, several anticipated reviewer questions, and a report highlighting potential literature gaps, all in under 12 hours."

Prof. Dr. med. Richard Cathomas
Head of Oncology and Hematology, Kantonsspital Graubünden, Switzerland

Author contributions

Jenny and Daniel. Both PhDs, with industry experience at Roche and Google. We built Occam's Pen because we kept wishing it existed.

Dr. Jenny Thom-Sadilek. PhD in immunology. Reviews every manuscript.

Dr. Daniel Sadilek. PhD in computer science. Built the review system.

Questions

Yes. Files are encrypted in transit and at rest. Only the review system and our reviewing scientist see them, and we never use submissions to train AI models. We keep files for up to a year in case you resubmit elsewhere, and delete them on request.

Original research, clinical trials, systematic reviews, meta-analyses, and case series in biomedical and clinical research. Not sure if yours fits? Ask us.

No. The science and the data stay yours. We edit freely, up to rewriting whole sections, but every change is a tracked change you can accept or reject.

It depends on the journal. Most ask for a statement on AI-assisted editing, but they differ in the wording and where it goes: cover letter, Methods, or Acknowledgments. We add the disclosure for our part of the work to your manuscript, worded and placed the way your target journal asks. If you used other AI tools, disclose those yourself.

You get the review first. When you tell us you're using our edits, we send an invoice, payable by card or bank transfer. If you don't use the review, you owe nothing.

Reply to the delivery email. We'll explain any finding.

William of Ockham, a 14th-century friar, argued that you should cut every assumption you don't need. That became Occam's razor. After 700 years with a blade, we thought he deserved a pen.

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